So The initial paper was great, I was asked to more details the characters (like Brently Mallard)  and more citing on that description of each character tied back to the articles.  In other words as you read “The Story of An Hour” and you make reference to Mrs. Mallard being married or if she was young you must cite where in the article may have led you to make this character analysis. the same with Mr. Mallard though there is not much you can say based on the story we know that at the time white men lived in two story house and that white men were married to white women because it was against the law to marry interracially and you must use an external cite to support this.  The same goes for the author and the William Faulkner’s A Rose for Emily .  I sorry I did not know the extent of this essay.