Instructor’s note to Student: Hi Student, Please revise paper per my instructions below:

You should revise your paper. I have taken out all of the incorrect data and writing. Your paper should be very informative, precise, and speak in First Person. You should speak to be informative and speak about bringing awareness to waste and pollution in the Mississippi River and Ross Barnett Reservoir. You should write to add these three points in your paper:
1) Bringing awareness to Mississippi River and Ross Barnett Reservoir waste and pollution.
2) What type of waste and pollution does these water sources see?
3) What can Mississippi do to resolve this issue?